We couldn't find the chinatown bus in NYC so we took a greyhound instead. I shared part of my seat with a very large man. We just went to breakfast at a Polish diner with Erick and Rose and pancakes. We'll stay here today and tonight and then leave for Louisville tomorrow.
-Alex
2 comments:
Alex, you state in the blog description that "Loren and myself will traveling," yet you are in fact traveling so must either include "to be" verbs (which we all hate, so I understand your reluctance) or state that Loren and you "travel," which is present tense and a bit awkward, but much more to the point and certainly devoid of silly grammatical and syntactic errors. I enjoy the first post. You should include more images, and include your own philosophy and mental development and progression throughout the trip. Also, comment on Loren's mental health, and he will comment on yours, and we will all comment on both of you, and it will be like therapy.
Your therapist called.
Sock.
right on. who's jason alexaqnder?
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